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Hemi

  • Nominated by: Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 15:00, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: First Mon Calamari character GAN
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS

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Support

  1. VergenceScatter (talk) 16:52, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
  2. ACvote.png I've rearranged and reworded parts of the body in my copy edit, let me know if there's anything you disagree with. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:19, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
  3. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 14:31, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

Object

Vitus
  • To begin with, I think we can split the History paragraph --Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:26, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed through discord.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 03:09, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
Braha
Macaroni
  • Context for the Executor.
  • Species and gender should be mentioned in the bio or P+T, not both.
  • Skin and eye color should only be mentioned in the P+T.
  • File:Hemi and Dodonna.png can use some cropping, and the stuff to the left of Dodanna doesn't seem necessary. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:23, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Intro can mention a date.
  • Please split up the first bio paragraph.
  • Please specify what Solo was signaled to do. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:14, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Intro should be expanded a bit, probably with more details on the assault.
    • Fixed.
  • Should "assault" in "Assault on the Mako-Ta Space Docks" be capitalized or not? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:25, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
    • The assault isn't conjecture so it could be fine.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 00:50, 15 October 2021 (UTC)
      • There can be un-capitalized non-conjectural titles. I'd like you to investigate if this is the case. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:35, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
        • Doesn't seem like it is the case.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 03:10, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Bio could use some subsectioning. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:42, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Subsectioned.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 20:43, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
  • The second and third paragraphs don't mention Hemi at all, I think a smidge of condensing is needed. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:07, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
Fan
  • Alliance Fleet links to the legends page for Rebel Alliance Navy.
  • "The Mon Calamari told General Dodonna that the Alliance Fleet had escaped, but their shields were failing." Specify that it was the Republic's shields which were failing here, as this sentence could be misinterpreted as the shields of all rebel ships that escaped Mako-Ta failing at once.
  • Starship should be linked to in the body.
  • "When the starships were able to get back and running" Back from what?
  • "Hemi was at Dodanna's side when he ordered the fleet to scatter" specify that Dodonna was the one who ordered the fleet to scatter. Fan26 (Talk) 03:35, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Handled. For the first objection the link wasn't needed to begin with and the fourth one I reworded the whole sentence.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 03:57, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
Ayrehead02
  • I think you can expand the start of the bio to include a couple of sentences of description of what is happening during the Assault on the Mako-Ta Space Docks and the Republic's part in it. For example, it sounds awkward to say "the Star Destroyers were converging on them as they had used the MC80A as bait" and "override codes to get the Shu-Torun technologies that rendered them useless" as you're referring back to information that should ideally have been established up front. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:08, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Added.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 21:43, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Reading through the comic again I think there's still some major stuff missing, you state that the problem caused by the Shu-Torun technology is the hangar bay doors, but the more important issue is that they can't jump to hyperspace. They actually resolve both those issues though and the Republic does escape, but then comes back to the docks to try and help rescue those on the stations still. I'd also include that the cruisers were at the docks being refitted with the Shu-Torun technology, and mention that the Shu-Torun people betray the Alliance because they're working for the Empire. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:34, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
        • Added. I think the area might need an image now but I want your thoughts.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 03:07, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
          • There's definitely room for an image in the second subsection. Before you mention the Imperial attack you still need to establish that the Republic was one of the cruisers at the dock being refitted. I'd also establish the Shu-Torun technologies being added during the refit and that they're actually sabotage before you mention the Imperials showing up. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:50, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
  • You should establish in the first sentence of the second subsection that they're using the Republic as bait, rather than the second. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:50, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
  • In the first subsection you say that the rebel cruisers are brought sucessfully online, but then in the second subsection they still need Han Solo to provide them with the codes to override the Shu-Torun technologies? Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:50, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
  • "The Republic was taking heavy damage when Hemi reported that although all the remaining cruisers were online, their engines were too damaged for them to go anywhere" this makes it sound like all the cruisers have damaged engines rather than just the Republic. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:50, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
Vergence
  • Just one thing: both of the quotes suggest that Hemi said the entire thing, but the way the quotes are written (and the comic image on the page) suggest that others spoke part of them. Can you please make it clear that multiple people are speaking in the quotes? VergenceScatter (talk) 22:22, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Not an objection, but you can put WP:Comics at the top of the nomination. VergenceScatter (talk) 22:24, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
CC-8
  • Gray should be used rather than grey, keeping with the Manual of Style requirement for American English
  • Also from the MoS, Rebel should be capitalized when talking about the organization Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:13, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • Precedent is to put the character's place and date of death in the same note. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 07:19, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Fixed.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 01:57, 19 January 2022 (UTC)
      • It still does not include the place. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 13:01, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Radiation Cannon

  • Nominated by: Editoronthewiki (talk) 20:47, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I meant to nom this after I expanded it but needed to make those specific B1 pages first
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:FFGAMES

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Support

  1. ACvote.png JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:36, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
  2. YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg (talk) 20:24, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
  3. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 04:58, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote.png OOM 224 21:25, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • Missing Mediacat.
  • Context for Battlefront, and both the game and game guide need their full release dates added.
  • The bts goes from discussing Legion, to Legends, and back to Legion. I think it would make more sense to group the bits on Legion. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:43, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
  • I don't see a need to have a close-up of the image in the infobox, only for a larger version to be in the body. See WP:LG#Main image. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:29, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • Any progress on that image?
    • Nothing on art-station, and my attempt at reuploading looked worse. i've put in an image request Editoronthewiki (talk) 01:08, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
      • Striking for now, but this has to be resolved before the nom can pass OOM 224 18:20, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Compound words should be hyphenated with en dashes (see WP:DASH) OOM 224 18:54, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Good? Editoronthewiki (talk) 01:08, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
    • "non-mounted" is fine with just a hyphen since "mounted" is only one word OOM 224 18:46, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
Manoof
  • First off, apologies as I thought I reviewed this previously! I don't think we need to link the word "article" to that article since it's listed in the reference and source Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:15, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Full article date should be noted. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:15, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
  • I think there's some other categories that could be applied Category:Personal heavy weaponry for example doesn't seem to be captured by the existing categories. Do we also need to have a category for separatist weapons? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:15, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Is it fair to say it had no adverse effects for all droids, not specifically battle droids? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:15, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • A quick search on the FFG site reveals another article that mentions the subject, one that predates the post currently documented.
  • Not a fan of the body image as it has a very tangential relation to the subject. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 08:25, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Would like to see the "size" field filled out a la X-45 and IQA-11 Blaster Rifle. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 14:30, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
  • The outcome of this TC needs to be reflected in the article. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 10:18, 21 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • OOM has uploaded a better version of the infobox image, so that is taken care of. again, thank you OOM Editoronthewiki (talk) 15:55, 22 November 2021 (UTC)


Mupple pie

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 14:31, 13 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The one and only pie from Droids
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Support

  1. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 06:49, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
  2. VergenceScatter (talk) 01:18, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
  3. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:20, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote.png 1358 (Talk) 16:01, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
  5. ACvote.png MasterFredCommerce Guild.svg(talk) 11:41, 21 January 2022 (UTC)

Object

Luca
  • Could you add a bit more context to Baobab's? Perhaps merchant.
  • I'd switch the quote in description with the quote in the intro. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 07:52, 20 November 2021 (UTC)
Ecks
  • The last History sentence is a bit confusing. I'm presuming the security guards pursued and arrested the Yomms, but it's not entirely clear from this sentence: "However, they were quickly run down and apprehended by Baobab." 1358 (Talk) 09:33, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
    • It was actually Mungo who pursued the guards, hopefully it's clearer now. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:59, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
      • Hmm, you'd think security guards would be the ones doing the apprehending. :P 1358 (Talk) 16:01, 20 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Ceasar

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Talk) 22:19, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Fixed what got it removed from status a few years ago. Let's see what else is wrong with this bad boy
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS

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Support

  1. ACvote.png Nom more of the Marvel SW stuff you've written up! :P JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:33, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • Intro & paragraph #2 in bio could use a split.
  • I'd say you can create a category for watchbeasts.
  • As high quality as Cull's scans are, they should honestly be digitized.
  • Missing a P+T section, where info on skin color would be better suited.
  • Comic requires full release date. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:38, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Should all be addressed. IFYLOFD (Talk) 02:57, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
  • It would be better for the subsections to be two or three paragraphs each instead of one and four.
  • Definitely room for at least one more image.
  • Is Bazarre supposed to be italicized? Its page makes it seem that way.
  • Context on Bazarre in the bio. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:09, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Should be taken care of. IFYLOFD (Talk) 04:12, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
  • As great as the bts quote is, I don't think it's necessary. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:08, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • Another image for "Skirmish on Patch-4"? Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 18:14, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Our page on the comic credits two writers, while this article only names one. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 18:16, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Should both be fixed. IFYLOFD (Talk) 05:24, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Fan
  • That luke quote is clearly a reference to " I come to bury Caesar, not to praise him." from Shakespeare's play. Would you think that's relevant BtS info? Fan26 (Talk) 06:23, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Sure, why not. Tossed in a mention. IFYLOFD (Talk) 00:31, 25 December 2021 (UTC)
Luca
  • Any reason why the reference is formatted differently from the appearance? LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 08:34, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Just me being stupid. Fixed IFYLOFD (Talk) 05:31, 19 January 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
  • Probably need to mention that it picked Lando up prior to saying that it dropped him. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
  • A few things mentioned in the intro aren't in the article body: Male; that he was put there to guard Ferret's stuff and allowed to run wild in Ferret's absence. It also reads as if Ferret WANTED Ceasar to kill lando and luke, whilst the article indicates this was purely because of Ceasar's aggressive nature. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Did the rebels have Ferret's blessing to be there, this is unclear and provides context on why Ferret isn't there but they have his shuttle. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Can we add the Males category? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 12 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Blue-milk pancakes

  • Nominated by: D MCCG D MCCGholiday.png (chat) 01:52, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: CAN turned into GAN
  • WookieeProject (optional):

(1 ACs/1 Users/2 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote.png JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:49, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
  2. VergenceScatter (talk) 07:40, 30 December 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • References should be removed from the intro and should only be present in the body.
  • Is there no relevant image for the body? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 14:43, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
    • The image up right now is the only time it is actually shown. ~ D MCCG D MCCGholiday.png (chat) 23:40, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
      • You can add an image of Derlin eating the pancakes.
        • Added an image in the History section. ~ D MCCG D MCCGholiday.png (chat) 13:43, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
    • I also want to add a audio file for the quote but don't know how. ~ D MCCG D MCCGholiday.png (chat) 23:45, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
      • I'm not sure either, never have been able to do audio files. You can try asking Ayrehead02.
        • Ok, I'll ask him. Thanks ~ D MCCG D MCCGholiday.png (chat) 13:43, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
  • You can split up the opening quote so that there's a quote for the History section. And is there a quote you can use in the Description section? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:25, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
    • I just added a new quote to the History section. I didn't find any quote that fit the Description section. ~ D MCCG D MCCGholiday.png (chat) 13:43, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
  • I'd like to see the history section mention that Derlin preferred the pancakes to the Empire's food, per that opening quote. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 06:49, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Done. ~ D MCCG D MCCGholiday.png (chat) 13:24, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • Please cite Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know, Updated and Expanded if it contains the same info as the old version.
    • Done. ~ D MCCG D MCCGholiday.png (chat) 20:40, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Article should establish that R0-GR used to make blue-milk pancakes before his encounter with Hondo. Currently the subject's first mention in History comes in the second paragraph. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:38, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Did a little sentence in the beginning. ~ D MCCG D MCCGholiday.png (chat) 20:40, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Intro says R0-GR made the pancakes in 4 ABY, while the body puts the date after the fact. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:37, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed it. ~ D MCCG D MCCGholiday.png (chat) 02:28, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • Is there a good reason for the article title being in plural? "Pancakes" works well in singular and most other food articles are in singular as well (and Wikipedia does the same). 1358 (Talk) 14:19, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
    • I put it in plural because it was always called "pancakes" instead of "pancake". But honestly I could put it in singular if necessary. ~ D MCCG D MCCG.png (chat) 00:09, 21 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • I saw you were looking for help adding audio files and added them. Let me know if there's any issues with them or they need changing. NBDani (talk) 19:19, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Thank you! ~ D MCCG D MCCGholiday.png (chat) 20:29, 21 November 2021 (UTC)


Unidentified aiwha

  • Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:24, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
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Support

  1. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 20:06, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

Braha
Macaroni
  • Biography can use some subsectioning. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:10, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Not as long a read of Of beasts and men ;) sectioned up Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 02:43, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Rodian Splice

  • Nominated by: Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (she/her) (talk) 20:46, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: "Han Solo, a desperate smuggler with something to prove..."
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:GE, WP:Comics

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Support

  1. Bootyful. Tuggs' kiss! -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg (talk) 23:13, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
  2. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 00:06, 20 November 2021 (UTC)
  3. I didn't realize you already had two votes before reviewing: Here is an extra vote for you. :P LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 18:19, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote.png 1358 (Talk) 13:24, 19 January 2022 (UTC)
  5. ACvote.png JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:52, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Object

Macaronian splice
  • Nice work here, just a couple of things:
  • I think the Tuggs quote in the description makes it very clear that he has no interest in drinking the drink, so can we really assume that even the correct version is potable to Artiodacs?
    • Can consume but chooses not to suggests potable :) Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (she/her) (talk) 18:07, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
  • I'd like to see the bts can mention what color it was in the fifty-sixth issue—or maybe it's not colored there at all? Right now I'm not seeing why the green color needs to be noted.
  • A release date for the fifty-seventh issue should be added.
  • And finally, seeing as comic lettering is generally in all caps, where is the lowercased "splice" coming from? If nowhere, I see no harm in accepting the fully capitalized "Rodian Splice" from the cookbook. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:57, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
    • "Like that when I got here"--probably was conjectural. Changed! Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (she/her) (talk) 18:07, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
Luca
  • After going through the comic, the context for Solo is actually supported by SW 56.
  • There is a double reference in that paragraph.
  • Even though TOBSOC contradicts the comics regarding the color, I think we could consider both the colors as correct IU, since the beverage could have two different possible colorations. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 18:39, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Since comic is just green and cookbook is three different color layers, I suspect they just used the name without regard for appearance, not intended. May be speculative to put the discrepancy IU instead of BTS? Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (she/her) (talk) 07:16, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
      • Uh well, I guess it can stay in the BTS then. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 14:33, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
  • There is room for another image in the BTS, I would suggest either a pic that shows the green-colored Rodian Splice or the cover of SW 56.
    • Resolved via Discord. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 18:19, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Please give a look at my copy-edit to see if you're ok with it. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 14:33, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • I'd agree with Luca that I think the colors can both be treated as in-universe and go into the description and the infobox, maybe even mentioned in history. There are certainly cocktails in real life that can come in variant colors so I don't see why this needs to be a contradiction. It seems especially odd with the images showing the colors both used within the body of the article. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:12, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

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Control (corvette)

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  1. For real this time — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg (talk) 18:11, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
  2. Good work for your first GAN. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 19:21, 17 November 2021 (UTC)

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Erebus
  • Characteristics goes before History.
  • Intro could definitely be expanded to give a quick summary about what it did, just saying that it was a Corellian corvette use by the Empire during the war in a training simulation doesn't seem like enough.
    • Added a little more information.--Dat1899 (talk) 15:07, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Italicization for the Delta-class DX-9 stormtrooper transport
  • Per Grievous's frigate or Battlecruiser 17, individual ships do not share the same specifications or manufacturer as the class they are a part of. As such, unless it is specifically confirmed by a source, please remove both the Corellian Engineering Corporation and hyperdrive rating from the page. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 03:13, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Repaired. Also added some information from the game itself.--Dat1899 (talk) 15:07, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
Yakov
  • I don't think "corvette" should be a "role" in the infobox since it's already the "class" -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg (talk) 17:17, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
  • (Review note): when you need to italicize something that is linked, if you want to display the exact article title, do not pipelink it like [[Executor|''Executor'']]; instead do ''[[Executor]]''. Only pipelink and put the italicization inside the pipelink if you need to for some reason, such as [[Executor/Legends|''Executor'']] or [[Imperial-class Star Destroyer|''Imperial''-class Star Destroyer]]. If this isn't clear, please ask on #user-help on Discord. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg (talk) 17:25, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Thank you for the suggestion,.--Dat1899 (talk) 20:45, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
      • Note: I struck this for Jocasta purposes, but the advice stands. It's been moved to #Comments -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg (talk) 18:13, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • Is there a relevant image we can add for the body? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:19, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
    • There is the image of the outpost the TIE Bombers attacked, though I think it needs to be up to date (meaning it has to be a screenshot from the newer version of the game), but I can add it nonetheless.--Dat1899 (talk) 11:34, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
      • Update. Added image and quote. As well as correcting some mistakes.--Dat1899 (talk) 10:32, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
  • "used by the Galactic Empire during the Galactic Civil War within an Imperial simulation" -- it's unclear to me if this ship actually existed or if it only was ever a thing within the simulation. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:32, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
    • I think "within an Imperial simulation" describes it all. We don't know if this was a real ship, and it is only known to be featured in a simulation. Hence "within an Imperial simulation".--Dat1899 (talk) 14:06, 21 January 2022 (UTC)

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Angela Morley

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NanoLuuke
  • In intro. "(born on March 10, 1924 in Leeds, West Yorkshire, England)" should be replaced by (birth date – death date). --NanoLuukeCloning facility 13:44, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
  • In Biography, events have to be presented in chronological order, so "Angela Morley was an English composer and conductor." should not be the first sentence. --NanoLuukeCloning facility 13:44, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
  • "Over the years, Morley became a frequent collaborator of Williams, working as an orchestrator on many of his subsequent film scores." should be removed, per policy. I have no objection as to putting this information in the introduction, as allowed by the same policy. --NanoLuukeCloning facility 13:44, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
CC-8
  • A screenshot of the moment the force theme plays would make a good image for the bio, unless you can find something more approrpiate Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:49, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Good idea! Added. Dentface (talk) 01:04, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
  • The body should specify the category Morley was nominated for as well as the film it was for.
    • Appeasing our overlord Jocasta. Dentface (talk) 18:54, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
  • "collaborate throughout the production of A New Hope in 1977." This should specify that the film was released in 77, unless a source specifies that the collaborations took place in that year. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:26, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Title: Added.
    • The source explicitly states that Morley began working with Williams in 77 well after the film's orchestration was underway. Dentface (talk) 01:53, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
      • If that's the case then why is the additional reference to the film itself there? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:47, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
        • Good point. I did it out of habit. Removed. Dentface (talk) 17:29, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Some of the information should be presented in a more chronological order, like I don't think ESB should be mentioned in relation to Spencer's role in it, and Morely's contribution to the ANH score should be mentioned in the paragraph about her participation in that film. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:23, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
  • There's duplicate references in the third body paragraph.
  • The part about her ESB contributions going unrevealed are not mentioned in the source that's given, I think it'd be fine to remove that sentence Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:12, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Duplicate refs: Done.
    • ESB: Done. Dentface (talk) 22:41, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • The image in the body could be enlarged a bit more. Also, spaces in file names should be replaced by underscores.
  • The two short paragraphs are too short to warrant paragraphs of their own, so they should be combined with the others.
  • "As such, all of Morley's specific contributions to the film's score remain unknown, with one exception" — I don't think this is necessary. The next sentence could just be rewritten slightly to say that she revealed one of her orchestrations being the trench run's "The Force Theme" OOM 224 17:59, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Image: Done.
    • Merged one paragraph. Which other paragraph in your opinion is too short?
    • Adjusted sentence as requested. Dentface (talk) 21:57, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
      • I think the first and second paragraphs of the Biography can be combined. OOM 224 22:02, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Lastly, just a few minor things: context should be provided for ANH at its initial mention in the Biography (in this case, the date), "toward" is preferred over "towards" in formal writing, and the image caption is missing some links OOM 224 22:05, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Film date, and "toward" have been added. What links need to be added to the image caption? Per here, "links should only be added in quote attributions and image captions if the subject is not linked in the article body already." I don't see anything in the caption that isn't already linked in the body. Am I missing something? Dentface (talk) 03:19, 19 January 2022 (UTC)
      • The Death Star, but I've added the link now OOM 224 17:51, 19 January 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • {{Cite web}} can be implemented for her website in the external links section. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:00, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Just checked, her website is now live again, so I just put it back to "Official site" without an archive link. Dentface (talk) 06:24, 20 January 2022 (UTC)

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Star Wars Episode VII: Shadows of the Sith

  • Nominated by: Dentface (talk) 22:00, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
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  • It's not a strong objection, but I'm a bit conflicted by the use of "wind down" here: "as development on The Force Unleashed began to wind down". Personally, (and keep in mind I'm French), I was only aware of the meaning "relax", "slow down", but I also discovered it could mean exactly what you intended: "to draw gradually toward an end" (per Merriam-Webster). At any rate, I find it confusing, too colloquial and not explicit enough. Maybe changing it for "as The Force Unleashed reached the end of its development cycle", or something similar? --NanoLuukeCloning facility 00:40, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
  • In the Bibliography, the entry could be updated with {{C|Logo only}} (as supported by policy). I have a copy of Rogue Leaders: The Story of LucasArts and it looks like there's nothing else. --NanoLuukeCloning facility 00:40, 5 November 2021 (UTC)

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Full Monty Catering

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  • I think it needs to be explicitly stated that "may the craft be with you" is a play on the common SW term Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:35, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Since the website and facebook page are broken/inactive, can we say the company no longer trades or something to that extent, not necessarily specific (last fb post is 2015 but it seems the website went down in Aug 2018 based on the webarchive snapshots) Until I looked at the external links that was not evident, which seems quite relevant. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:35, 23 December 2021 (UTC)

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Invasion of Saleucami

  • Nominated by: Editoronthewiki (talk) 13:07, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Next up in my duology of Clone Wars battles that grew too big for CAN
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  • The prelude is quite long considering that the actual invasion is only two sentences long. Could it be shortened?
    • Its all relevant information so it is okay Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:00, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
      • I think it is a bit too much detail, but I'll strike it. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 14:23, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Is there no available quote for the Invasion section? LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 09:38, 11 December 2021 (UTC)

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  • Some detail has been removed from the prologue Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:44, 12 January 2022 (UTC)


Battlecruiser 19

  • Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 03:08, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The other battlecruiser
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  • "Sometime after their retreat, the Republic returned to the system for a second attack on the blockade. Following their return, the Republic fleet sent a starfighter squadron commanded by Skywalker's Padawan, Ahsoka Tano, to attack the blockade" "Attack the blockade is used at the end of two consecutive sentences here. Fan26 (Talk) 19:55, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Reworded. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 20:39, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
      • Sorry it took a month and you reminding me to get back to this Erebus, I depend on the bot to ping me far too much :/ Fan26 (Talk) 03:05, 14 January 2022 (UTC)

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Hali Ke

  • Nominated by: TK-462 (talk) 18:40, 20 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Wew, its been a minute.
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Port in a Storm

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Braha'in a'tok
  • The history section requires some level of sub-sectioning. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 22:39, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Pijal, Hosnian Prime, and Han Solo needs context Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:18, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Done, if Hosnian Prime works? Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (she/her) (talk) 18:56, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
      • Unsure what the seat means but I assume that's some political terminology. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 20:49, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
        • Oop! So, "the seat" is where the government operates from, usually the same as its capital. However, the book doesn't actually identify Hosnian Prime with the word "capital" (and despite my searching, didn't seem to call it a planet either?) So perhaps for clarity, I could rework that and use another ref for context. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (she/her) (talk) 04:16, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
        • See if the revision works. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (she/her) (talk) 08:20, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Riosa also needs context. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:19, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
Pasta in a Storm
  • Appearances/Sources needs to specify the first appearance/source that mentioned the drink prior to it being retconned into AOTC. See Puck Naeco/Legends#Appearances as an example. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 07:07, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Oh thank you! I'm still getting my head around what's considered a retconned appearance, so my formatting is behind. Let me know if I've got it right. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (she/her) (talk) 08:20, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
      • Gave it a tweak, but looks good!
  • Can we really be sure that How to Not Get Eaten by Ewoks depicts the drink during the events of AOTC? Perhaps that would be better sourced to the film itself. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:09, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Adjusted that, have a look! Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (she/her) (talk) 11:15, 28 November 2021 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • What do you think about moving the info about the saying to History? I say this because that's where Bassa hound documents it.
    • Sure--thought on which subsection? Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (she/her) (talk) 07:56, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
      • When is the saying said? Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 08:26, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
        • Looks from Star Wars: The Last Jedi – DJ – Most Wanted 1 like it'd be "by 34 ABY" (just prior to Episode VIII). The content about that saying doesn't really fit with the current subheadings, so not sure where it'd slot in. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (she/her) (talk) 13:13, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
          • Should be fine under "Recipe for relief." Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 13:16, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
            • Made the move--and double-checked that I definitely saved this time. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (she/her) (talk) 14:35, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
              • Oh, can you also specify who's saying it like Bassa does? I realize this will bring the article above 1000 words. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 08:48, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
                • I'd rather not add any more detail about that one line of narration than is already there, since it's all unrelated to the actual drink. It's just a thought DJ has when he gets arrested: "All I want to do is spend a week at Zord's Spa and Bathhouse. But... any port in a storm." The bassa hound example is explicitly referencing bassa hounds, whereas the saying is... well, a saying. The drink is likely named for that saying, but using the saying doesn't mean referencing the drink. Actually toyed with whether it ought to be there at all, but I think the duck test supports noting that there's a saying close to the drink name, but not stating that the drink is named for it? (Thanks for keeping an eye on the word count, too! I keep eyeing it like "almost... there.....") Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (she/her) (talk) 09:45, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
  • The Takodana mission takes place in 5 ABY. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 12:18, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Thank you, changed that! Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (she/her) (talk) 07:56, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
      • No changes were made. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 08:26, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
        • Argh, save failure, thanks for heads-up. Re-changed and this time it saved! Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (she/her) (talk) 13:13, 15 December 2021 (UTC)

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  • Noting that I'm keeping a close watch with wordcounter since it hovers right around 1k words, sometimes over and sometimes under. If the review process takes it over and it stays stable over 1k, I'll withdraw accordingly. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (she/her) (talk) 18:56, 24 November 2021 (UTC)


Unidentified clone trooper (Kamino security)

  • Nominated by: Eddiebox28 (talk) 17:05, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Nomination number two for me. Let's see how it goes.
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Erebus
  • The intro can be reduced a fair amount, since it provides more information than it should.
  • Currently, the two paragraphs in the History section are quite large. Could you please split them up, as well as provide a second image?
    • Done, for the first part. I'd like to upload an image taken from the Clone Wars Rewatch article but it's a screenshot they have taken from the episode. Would the source be the article or the episode? Eddiebox28 (talk) 18:00, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Context for Coruscant in History, please.
    • Done, I think? I'm assuming what I've done is what you meant, in which case does Kamino require it as well? Eddiebox28 (talk) 18:00, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
  • There is currently a single duplicate link in the body. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 17:22, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
  • The episode being part of the sixth season should be sourced to the episode guide instead, per a substantial amount of modern precedents. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 17:36, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • Article title should be at "Unidentified clone trooper officer" since there are no other canon pages competing for the namespace.
    • Actually, does the episode even call this character an "officer"? Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 18:22, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
      • I've just double checked and no, not explicitly. However, in this case, it's clear he is a higher rank than ordinary clones: he has command over troops and is ordered to position them by superiors ("your men"); his armor and gear resemble those worn by other clone officers throughout the show. This is a slight assumption on our part but it's one backed up by a lot of evidence presented to us in the episode. I think referring to him as a standard trooper might be disingenous. Eddiebox28 (talk) 19:00, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
        • But he is a clone trooper, so that isn't inaccurate. We shouldn't extrapolate meaning based on appearance in this case. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:38, 27 November 2021 (UTC)
          • True. What should I move it to? "Unidentified clone trooper (Kamino security)" is apparently either invalid or taken (I'm assuming by a redirect since no such page exists). Eddiebox28 (talk) 20:53, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
            • It's a redirect. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 11:51, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
              • Forgot about the WLH tool! Useful little thing. So, can I flag the redirect for deletion? Or is there a different method used for deleting redirects? Eddiebox28 (talk) 16:15, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
                • Mark for deletion, but ensure that no mainspace pages are linking to it first. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 16:22, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
                  • Deletion is pending. Will move as soon as possible. Eddiebox28 (talk) 17:48, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
  • A link to a disambiguation page is also in order. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 18:20, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
  • The air date needs another source. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 18:43, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Would the German source cited in the episode's article be acceptable? Eddiebox28 (talk) 23:55, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
      • Sure. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 10:21, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
        • Done. Looks a bit odd, but I've lifted it from other pages that use the reference where it also looks odd. Eddiebox28 (talk) 03:01, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
          • Modified the ref, please take a look. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 11:14, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
            • Excellent. Looks much better! Thanks! Eddiebox28 (talk) 01:02, 5 January 2022 (UTC)

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Unidentified Nightbrother village

  • Nominated by: AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 21:10, 28 November 2021 (UTC)
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Junkfort system

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Shayanomer
  • The air date needs another source. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 18:54, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
  • The episode being the season finale needs another source too. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 10:03, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Done --Vitus InfinitusTalk 19:03, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
      • That can just be sourced to that TV listing ref, so the extra ref can be eliminated. Also, please split said citation into two. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 19:19, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
        • Split the TV listing ref? Wouldn't I need to add two refs to source that sentence then? --Vitus InfinitusTalk 23:10, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
          • Yes, since it aired as a two-parter. We should never cite multiple sources in the same reference outside of notes. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 07:31, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
            • Done. As for the Discord objection, I found this site for having a source that states the season, episode number, and air date. Would this work? --Vitus InfinitusTalk 01:18, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
              • That's a fansite, so no. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 10:23, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
                • I can't find a source, going to go look through SW.com again --Vitus InfinitusTalk 17:44, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
    • That one doesn't have the episode number, it just says season finale --Vitus InfinitusTalk 19:40, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
      • Then you can use both refs; one for episode number and the other for season finale. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 08:35, 11 January 2022 (UTC)

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Bogan Collection

  • Nominated by: LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 10:11, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: First Dooku: Jedi Lost GA, won't be the last :P
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Macaroni
  • The bts doesn't make it clear how you've made the connection between this article and the Legends counterpart. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:47, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
    • I've added "a similar location." LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 05:47, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
      • The two being similar doesn't mean they're the same thing. Now it just reads like the two being linked via tabs is just speculation. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 06:12, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
        • Removed the tabs. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 06:55, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • Is there an article for Vitus and Jareni's mission? If not one should probably be made. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:05, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Added.
  • Likewise, divers lightsabers seem like they deserve their own article. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:05, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
    • The source just says that there were "several lightsabers" in the collection.
      • Wait so where is "divers lightsabers" even coming from, I'm not seeing it in the blog article? Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:13, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
  • You should include that Bogan is another name for the dark side of the Force given the contents of the collection. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:05, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
  • If Sidious took control of the collection the Sith Order should also be listed in affiliations and mentioned in the body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:05, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Both added. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 05:55, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Taking a look through whatlinkshere, it seems like Parang and Spinner-web should be mentioned somewhere. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:32, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Nice catch, added. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 06:33, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

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  • I've contacted Charles Soule about this, but since I have received no reply, I guess we'll never know. :P LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 10:14, 4 December 2021 (UTC)


Merl Cobben

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:57, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Friendship ended with A New Hope pilots, Rise of Skywalker pilots are my best friend now
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  • Only a minor thing, the word "this" should be avoided in the IU parts of the article. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 18:13, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
    • "This" should only be avoided where it's being used to refer to the subject of the article or if it's not appropriate for past tense. I believe the instances here are all fine. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:29, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
      • I believe that "this" always sounds "informal," but since it isn't a written rule, I can't be sure to be right or wrong. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 18:32, 11 December 2021 (UTC)

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Hurrie Chind

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:59, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I'm honestly fairly certain that every minor pilot extra survives Exegol.
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  • Only a minor thing, but per Forum:CT:Use of the Film Template: "Template:Film is to be used in the Appearances section" and "Template:Film is to be used when sourcing the saga films in the Notes and references section." From what I understand, {{Film}} is mandatory. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 09:29, 12 December 2021 (UTC)

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Lanzora Garan

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:40, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Got to balance out with some FO folks
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OM-5

  • Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 02:22, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: About time
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  • Last half of the last sentence of the biography needs a tweak - something like "forcing the droid army to advance through a ravine as the Twi'leks and their families escaped the battle." or "forcing the droid army to advance through a ravine, allowing the Twi'leks and their families to escape the battle." Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:53, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Looks fine to me. If there's a problem, though, you are able to fix it yourself and inform me of a copy-edit. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 15:09, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
      • Thought I sorted this already, sorry it took a bit. Slight tweak made. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:07, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

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Brooke Vitale (second nomination)

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  • Please use "Shortstory" for the Storybook Library as well. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:16, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
    • I can't, as the individual books need to be italicized. The Storybook Library is not a book, it's a box set. Each title is its own hardback bound book with its own ISBN. As such, the titles need to be italicized. The Shortstory template does not allow for italicization in that way. Dentface (talk) 10:21, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
      • "sformatted" allows you to do it. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 10:42, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
        • Not in a way that's proper. "sformatted" allows you to italicize the title, yes, but you can't remove the quotations. The quotations are incorrect since these are not short stories. Dentface (talk) 21:33, 10 December 2021 (UTC) Update: I modified the template. Should work now. Dentface (talk) 06:21, 11 December 2021 (UTC)

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Jaguada/Legends

  • Nominated by: Goodmind (talk) 08:27, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
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  • Welcome to the GAN! Here are some things I noticed straight off the bat:
    • There are multiple duplicate links in the article. There's a tool which detects them for you, which can be enabled under the "Gadgets" tab of Preferences.
    • Ensure that the article respects the MOS. For example, "Do not separate compound terms upon first linking instance (examples: [[Battle of Hoth]], not [[Battle of Hoth|Battle of]] [[Hoth]]; [[YT-1300 light freighter]], not [[YT-1300 light freighter|YT-1300]] [[light freighter]]).."
    • Many of the dates don't appear to be sourced properly (e.g. That FFG post does not provide the date "0 ABY").
      • Just checking that Plagueis supports the date directly. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 08:03, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
        • Fixed Plagueis date --Goodmind (talk) 11:40, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
      • As discussed on Discord, the 0 ABY date is inaccurate. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 08:21, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
        • Per Discord, removed 0 ABY date--Goodmind (talk) 11:40, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Per the information in this article and Layout Guide, there needs to be both "Inhabitants" and "Locations" sections.
    • Check the abridged Dark Lord: The Rise of Darth Vader audiobook for a mention of the subject. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 08:57, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
      • Fixed most of these --Goodmind (talk) 14:30, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
  • I'm hearing popping in those newly-uploaded audio clips. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 12:37, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Looks like they've been removed now. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:09, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
Imp
  • Please subsection History. This will allow for more images and quotes to be added.
  • The last paragraph of History incorrectly uses present tense, whereas articles are generally written in past tense.
  • Please add {{Mediacat}}. Imperators II(Talk) 17:11, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • The hologram thing should be reflected in the body, as well. I presume this will allow to delink Vader in the quote attribution. Imperators II(Talk) 07:15, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Please choose and go with just one source for the double-referenced names in "Early history". Imperators II(Talk) 10:13, 20 January 2022 (UTC)

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Stewart McKenny

  • Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 05:03, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I know Stewart personally so hopefully that hasn't gotten in the way.
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  • "unique ability to vary his art style makes his artwork popular. " sounds subjective. I'd remove that from both the intro and the biography. Dentface (talk) 06:16, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
    • I've used the source's wording. Given it's an expo, it's likely they have data behind that statement. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:32, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Please go back through the body and the intro to make sure everything is italicized properly. Most products with titles aren't properly italicized by my reading. Dentface (talk) 06:16, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Done, I didn't italicise where I only mentioned the volume number, since that's not the actual title. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:32, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
      • Every instance of "Star Wars" needs to be italicized. Additionally, make sure your italicization of Star Wars Tales 18 in the first body paragraph does not italicize the issue number. Dentface (talk) 08:42, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
        • Done Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:55, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Is mentioning his work at Marvel really relevant, since it isn't tied to Star Wars? Dentface (talk) 06:16, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Yes, one of his works was later republished in a Marvel title but we can have non-star wars info in the intro. I decided not to include the other publishers (eg DC and IDW) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:32, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Your sources section should be formatted differently, using templates such as {{CWACite}}. Dentface (talk) 06:16, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Good catch, also amalgamated some of the refs where I thought it was applicable. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:32, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
  • In the first sentence in the first paragraph, there is an extra period. Dentface (talk) 08:42, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Would have struggled to find it without you specifying it's location, thanks! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:55, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
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  • "with a unique ability to change his drawing style, making his artwork popular." I think Dent was right to object to this. Even if the source says this, that is very clearly a subjective statement. Fan26 (Talk) 05:56, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Removed the popular bit for now, can the statement about his drawing style change or is that also subjective? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:55, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
      • (Sorry for forgetting about this for nearly a month btw) I'd call it subjective too, but if you want to call in a second opinion that's fine. Fan26 (Talk) 01:25, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
        • All good! I've removed it, I realised I'm not that hung up on it lol Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:16, 14 January 2022 (UTC)

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Gulf of Tatooine/Legends

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  • I think there's enough room in the body that a picture of a related subject could be included-maybe Baobab since he recounted the food fight incident that forced the layover? Fan26 (Talk) 14:24, 19 January 2022 (UTC)
    • No, sorry, that's just too indirect to warrant an image there. Imperators II(Talk) 14:50, 19 January 2022 (UTC)
      • Okay, fair Fan26 (Talk) 03:55, 20 January 2022 (UTC)

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Patriot Fist

  • Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 23:18, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Almost one of all the most common CIS ships
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  • I think an image of the actual Battle of Coruscant would be better than just an image of Coruscant itself --Vitus InfinitusTalk 23:38, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Refs 2-5 can be merged, see Tyrant ref 4 for an example --Vitus InfinitusTalk 02:22, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Sure. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 02:34, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
      • Oop, I meant 2 through 5 :P, so currently refs 3 and 4 can be merged into 2 --Vitus InfinitusTalk 02:56, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
        • Sorry, but I will not be doing that. I haven't done that with my others and I think that would be wrong here, too. Sorry. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 03:02, 24 December 2021 (UTC)

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Michael Kenneth Williams

  • Nominated by: Dentface (talk) 09:28, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
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  1. ACvote.png What happened with Legos? They used to be simple. Harry Potter Legos, Star Wars Legos, complicated kits, tiny little blocks. I mean I'm not saying it's bad, I just wanna know what happened Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:49, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

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  • The quote can be used at the top of the article rather than the body, or you could add another relevant quote
  • Him being a dancer, reporter, and American need to be reiterated in the article body Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:09, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
    • New intro quote: Added.
    • Updated body: Added. Dentface (talk) 20:03, 14 January 2022 (UTC)

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  • The Facebook external link says "Fan Page," but it was officially maintained and run by Williams' or his team. It was linked on his official website and other social media, the about page refers to his managament, and it has the title of "official," making it effectively his own Facebook page. Dentface (talk) 09:28, 24 December 2021 (UTC)


Jez (Human)

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AL1-L3

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:16, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Glad to see L3's impact on the droid world
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Jay's lightsaber

  • Nominated by: YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg (talk) 17:41, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
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Praknat 3

  • Nominated by: SilverSunbird (talk) 05:32, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: It got slightly too long.
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  • The History section looks beefy enough to me to be able to support an image, perhaps of Trymant IV or the Legacy Run?
  • I feel like the link to desert should be worked into the body, too.
  • The first two sentences of the intro can be shortened quite a bit. You've got all the nitty-gritty details in the body, so there's no real need to retread them in the intro as well. Even something as short as "Praknat 3 was the closest moon of the Outer Rim Territories planet Trymant IV." would do. Imperators II(Talk) 05:48, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Done. I went for a picture of the Emergence itself. SilverSunbird (talk) 05:53, 31 December 2021 (UTC)

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Also, I just want to thank Imperators II for the information about the Western Reaches; that had escaped my attention. SilverSunbird (talk) 05:32, 31 December 2021 (UTC)


Lyran IV

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Sif-Alula

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Silver Sea/Legends

  • Nominated by: VergenceScatter (talk) 02:23, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Despite its name, the Silver Sea is, in fact, blue
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  • CSWECite is needed under Sources, per policy. The subject doesn't appear to have its own entry. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 14:33, 8 January 2022 (UTC)

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Vader's diary

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Mazi

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  • You can date the destruction of Alderaan to 0 BBY Fan26 (Talk) 14:42, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

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Order 4

  • Nominated by: LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 08:52, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
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Unidentified admiral (Vallt's sector)

  • Nominated by: Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:42, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
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Mission to Bardram Scoft

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Riot Mar

  • Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 17:03, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My second live-action (and The Mandalorian) nomination! Comes without saying I've definitely had a lot more insight working on this one that I did with my first live-action nom. Riot Mar is ironically also a character I've taken a liking to because of their helmet. And also shoutout to Ayrehead, who did much of the initial work prior to the release all the extra Mando S1 material.
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Moggee

  • Nominated by: Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 18:06, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: This guy knows his insults
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  • Standard decade should be linked in the intro.
    • Fixed
  • I think you can cut down on all the alternative ways to referr to IG-88 and Moggee in the second paragraph of the intro. Using their names a few times more would be less awkward to read.
    • Fixed
  • You can use "they" to refer to them as well if their gener isn't specified. Avoiding makes the article awkward to read.
    • Fixed
      • "But when IG-88 followed after Moggee, the droid discovered a piece a metal on the ground and instead played a trick on Moggee." The second Moggee should be replaced by the word "them" IMO Fan26 (Talk) 04:26, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
  • The second sentence of the P&T should probably be broken up. Fan26 (Talk) 20:26, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Fixed--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 03:49, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Make sure to use they/them since their gender isn't specified. Avoiding pronoun usage makes it very awkward to read. Fan26 (Talk) 04:26, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
      • Fixed I think. Sorry about that.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 02:01, 19 January 2022 (UTC)
Lewis
  • Would it be worth noting in the BTS that Moggee was identified via Aurebesh?
    • Added.
  • Unless I missed something, it was not called a world in the issue, does this come from somewhere else? Lewisr (talk) 03:51, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
    • In the story it is referred to as a rock.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 05:24, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
      • I'm referring to Unidentified outpost world Lewisr (talk) 01:46, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
        • Yes I know. I'm kinda split on if calling a place a "rock" makes it a planet or world. Also sounds weird to call it a rock in the article.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 01:59, 19 January 2022 (UTC)
          • It could just as easily refer to a moon. There is no mention of what it specifically is, so moving the page to some title with astronomical object included seems more accurate Lewisr (talk) 05:04, 21 January 2022 (UTC)

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Dara Vish

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:00, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The Visual Guide ain't happening but the Handbook has abated my sadness for now
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Vassek 3

  • Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 20:45, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Let's finish the Lair of Grievous stuff
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  • "Located within the tangle of sharp, towering mountains, and plunging gorges and tall columns of the moon" — this is rich Description info. Can you try and move at least some of it there?
  • While you're at it, you should fix the dangling participle issue in that sentence: "Located within the tangle of sharp, towering mountains, and plunging gorges and tall columns of the moon, Vassek 3 served as the location of the personal fortress of Kaleesh Separatist General Grievous." the fortress, not Vassek 3, was located within the tangle.
  • Can we have consistency between referencing in infobox and the body?
  • It's been a while since I last saw the episode, is the "his" here supposed to refer to Fisto or Vebb? "his detachment of clone troopers"
  • Since it's so prominently visible in the image, do you think it's worth noting the vehicle Fisto arrived on Vassek 3 on? What about Vebb and the troopers, do we know about their vehicle of arrival?
  • I'd like you try and rewrite the third paragraph of History so that it's presented from a more omniscient perspective (the reader should know upfront that it was Grievous's fortress that Fisto and Vebb entered).
  • A dictionary gives the meaning of the word "to coerce" as "To pressure, intimidate, or force (someone) into doing something." Are you sure this applies to Dooku's actions? I was under the impression that the Jedi were tricked into traveling to Vassek 3, which doesn't really fall under the definition of someone being "forced", I believe. Imperators II(Talk) 16:45, 20 January 2022 (UTC)

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  • In the P&T, I don't think it's neccesary to restate that Fett is a human male.
  • Also from the P&T "He then reached out and grabbed her arm as he emphasized that Maul had taken Jesse captive." This feels like it belongs in the bio tbh, it's describing an action he did, not a personality trait. Fan26 (Talk) 16:00, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

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Zornak

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:51, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: If only his species had gotten an offhand mention, Wallace could have created another Moddell planet...
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  • "with his crew and enslaved the native Ewoks to procure precious gems for him and his crew" Think this should be reworded so it doesn't say "his crew" twice in the same sentence.
  • I think the infobox image should be exclusively of Zornak Fan26 (Talk) 03:13, 21 January 2022 (UTC)

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Backwards tailslide

  • Nominated by: DFaceG (talk) 14:48, 19 January 2022 (UTC)
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Zorbia II

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  1. Fan26 (Talk) 05:07, 21 January 2022 (UTC)

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